The Drowsy Kaye

Wow! This is really deep! I can't stop thinking about it! Great Job once again! I'll try to review more of your stuff, though my schedule is mighty full. :D ...

Hey Chernobyl! I had no idea what this is, but I loved every second of it!! Just, the language of the piece, the personal torment of the central character, even ...

A very nice way of expressing feelings concerning this matter. I've seen poems in this sort of structure, and many times, they don't work. But here, it's just perfect. Keep ...

WOW. I really liked that! The way that you use a lack of a numerical value, and just use "nth," really make the piece very different, in a good way. ...

Hello! While this could be an interesting story, there are way, WAY, too many grammar, and punctuation mistakes for it to be taken seriously. It's possible that you are from ...

Excellent first chapter! A very compelling read! Though, there were various typos, too many to list here, but either way, I can;t wait to see what else is in store ...

I will also review this story as a way of thanking you for reviewing mine. I also didn't really quite understand the story, but for someone who is, apparently, 16 ...